D II Screening Assignment 2

Marion - Prayers From The Inside

QUICK CUTS at the beginning. VO in BG good. Needs the sound of a rat in BG. BG Noise to loud overall. Radio FX a little loud overall. OOF shot NG - never use. Want a matching CU on big guy. MUCH BETTER.

Dir says - Prison track too loud.

Class sez: Tony cut around performance. Open to interpretation. SD elements. Tweaking on sd effects.


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JP - A View

LOW SOUND / Up in the roof/ Well visualized/ Tight CU/ 2 shot solid/ Break up on compression setting/

JP sez - Experimenting/ In Reverse of the ordinary/ Intimacy admist the metal and concrete/ Lots of great footage/

Class sez - good sound with construction noise/ visual effects and lights/

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Andrew - Script 7

No titles/ OOF Shot on CU/ Wide OTS. Good use of cutaways/ Close ups don’t match. “You deserve better” Trachea - OOF Shot. . I’ll do it.

Andrew sez - She’s not an actor. He is. Graham is. Only in CU for performances. Cutting around programs. Shot size difference.

Class sez: Good coverage. Able to work as tight as need be. Money and mc placement.

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Patrick - The Fighter

Green Screen experiment. Weird backgrounds. Into the story. Hard boiled. Cool and neat.

Patrick sez - Stylized material

Class sez: Understood stylized. Brave. Almodavr. Baz Luherman. Is a Visualsit.

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SING - “Two Inmates”

Beautifully cut and staged. Interesting and well performed. NOT FRAMED PROPERLY. Music not appropriate for ‘The Block’. Fade out too soon on ending. Met both of them 2 days before the shoot.

Sing sez - Use drama to set up action. No CU as a rule. Hard to use. CUT back and forth. Faded out early

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Timmy - “Forgotten Dope“

NO LETTERBOX = See the girl thinking DOLLY SHOT works okay -
Audio low

Timothy sez - Harder to edit - tired on this project. Sd discouraged me a little bit. Motivations for cuts hard to find. DOLLY MOVE FUN.

Class sez - Standard Coverage - CLOSE UP with her hand up.